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blergh.

You’re as fake as her nails

And she’s as shallow as you conscience

Lies on the tip of her tongue

Are fogging up your senses.

 

She’s all you’re about

The past has been forgotten

Memories of who you were

Has long since faded to nothing

 

 


My fingertips touch yours

Hold on for a little longer.

“You know I’d die for you, right?”

I nod and bite my lip.

It only matters

Whether you are willing to live

For me.

 

 

Your eyes are glazed over

And your speech is slurred

I ask you what’s wrong

You lie and say nothing

 

You reach out your hand

But I pull away

I don’t want you near me

I can’t even look you in the eyes

 

You gave us a promise

It was eaily broken

My last shreds of trust

Have been ripped away

 


Posted on 02/06/2007 2:20 PM Visits: 22
venomedkiss: 02/06/2007 2:57 PM
That person you are talking about seems really cruel and unforgivable. I like the way you put it in words, it's very profound. Pain tastes liberation when putted on paper! Hope you feel better, it doesn't look like an easy situation to overcome.
amante: 02/06/2007 3:11 PM
you mean in the last text thing?
no, it's not something i think ill ever be able to get over.
amante: 02/06/2007 3:11 PM
but thank you, though. :)
maxgreen4ever: 02/07/2007 5:51 AM
I'm sorry 4 that lesbian shit, I really wasn't myself in that day, so sorry. U are full gold if u can understand me. Don't hate me, I'm just a 13 year old teenage girl, who wants a bit attention, so sorry that I'm a FULL shithead!
amante: 02/07/2007 6:28 AM
yeah well.
i don't hate people. but i strongly dislike them.
maxgreen4ever: 02/07/2007 10:13 AM
Ok. I dig yo rhymes, man! I can "rap" these poems and u can be my ghost- writer? Okay, I'm a fuck and I can't sing or rap, so haha, I'm crazy bitch! Sorry, that's what I'm saying, don't stop writing!
midnightmile: 02/07/2007 11:57 AM
i liked the second poem best, it really appeals to me. Living for someone is bigger than being willing to die for them, it really is. i loved it :)

and i also agree fully on strongly disliking people. Ive stopped saying i hate people, but i definitely dislike them.You are right, once again. And maxgreen4ever, what are you on about? I guess im not "full of gold" cause i dont understand you, really. :/
amante: 02/07/2007 2:08 PM
thank you, midnightmile. i agree. it is bigger. thank you, i really love your comments. :)
amante: 02/08/2007 3:22 AM
maxgreen4ever:
okay.
i suppose some sort of "thank you" is in order, allthough i must admit i don't understand what you're on about.
my texts or poems or whatever you want to call them, are not meant to be rapped, nor sung. They are meant to be written down by me, for my own sake. And once in a while ill upload some of them, so people are more than welcome to read them. And, if they in addition to that, actually like the texts and can indentify with them or the texts bring out a certain feeling in the ones who read them, then that's the greatest feedback i can get.
really.
midnightmile: 02/08/2007 7:50 AM
:) you can call me anna if you want. cause thats my name lol.
yep thats it, thats my whole comment. im impressed its so short and...just. wow.
maxgreen4ever: 02/11/2007 3:35 AM
midnightmile: I wasn't talkin' to you.
amante: 02/11/2007 4:10 AM
she's free to comment on my journals as much as she likes. she's also free to respond to what you say, as you are speaking to me in ftont of everyone.
only1eye: 02/11/2007 9:59 PM
Your poems are so good I can only say I hope you never stop writing. and I wish to read every one of them.
godfatha: 02/19/2007 6:27 AM
Eveen more great work very well done.. :)
sallylovesgwen: 04/01/2007 6:41 AM
Your poetry definitely stirred feelings within me.
This happens rarely, thank you.
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